Picture Book Edit with Laura Wifler

This isn't a coaching call. It's a deep dive.

For the first time ever, I’m opening 5 exclusive spots for a Developmental Edit of your picture book. I’ve never offered this before—but after countless requests, I’m making a handful available! If you’ve written your story and want professional and thoughtful feedback before submitting to agents or publishers, this is your chance. I’ll do a full read-through of your manuscript (up to 1,200 words) and provide:

• Line-by-line comments and developmental notes on structure, rhythm, clarity, and theme
• 30 minute call to go over strengths, revision priorities, and next steps
• My proven annotated query letter template so you can go from manuscript draft to pitching for publication. 
  

As an award-winning, bestselling author, I know how transformative the right feedback can be—and I can’t wait to help you bring out the best version of your story.

This isn’t a surface-level review—it’s a thoughtful, experienced edit from a bestselling author and educator who’s helped dozens of writers secure book deals in the Christian space. Far more in-depth than a 1:1 coaching call, I'm bringing my editorial eye, publishing insight, and understanding of faith-informed storytelling to every page, helping you uncover what’s working, what’s missing, and what will make your story truly shine.